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 Post subject: You Destroyed Me, But That's OK.
PostPosted: Mon Jan 05, 2015 2:56 am 
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You destroyed me and I let you and I’ll never forgive myself for that, but that’s okay, because I’ve moved on and I’m better now. Your love was poison, and I knew it, but I didn’t care, but that’s okay, because I’ve moved on and I’m better now. I cried myself to sleep every night after you burned me, but that’s okay, I’m better now, because I’ve moved on.

You destroyed me and I let you, and I”ll never forgive myself for that, but that’s okay, because I was built stronger. Your love was poison, but thanks to you now I’m immune. I can’t cry myself to sleep anymore, and that’s okay, I feel no pain.

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 Post subject: Re: You Destroyed Me, But That's OK.
PostPosted: Thu Jan 08, 2015 4:47 pm 
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God that's sad. In my head, the meter kind of plays out like a corner-of-the-padded-cell whisper. Overall, 8/10. Maybe more clarity and less reliance on visceral emotion(I'm one to talk lol)


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 Post subject: Re: You Destroyed Me, But That's OK.
PostPosted: Fri Jan 09, 2015 6:43 am 
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It's a common theme in my work to write on visceral emotions- especially in poetry like this one.

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Come on, shoot faster,
Just a little bit of energy!
I wanna try something fun right now,
I guess some people call it anarchy!



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 Post subject: Re: You Destroyed Me, But That's OK.
PostPosted: Tue Dec 08, 2015 6:26 am 
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I like to talk, to exchange experiences in this forum. It is very good to very good..

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